Assignment one

Time to put everything into practice starting with a badly written alien script and ending in an animatic

Here is the break down of the script……

     FADE IN:
     A BOY in a BED ... tossing, turning ...
     a STORM outside ...
     He's ASLEEP and dreaming ...
 (E.S of outside of house, zoom in through dark window, silhoette of boy asleep)
                                                   DISSOLVE TO:
     A large, forbidding military installation.
     Set back off the road with chainlink fences around it.
     Sign in front, illuminated by spotlights, reads:
     (E.S of military base, zoom in to sign)
                       GROVE AIR FORCE BASE
                        AIR DEFENSE COMMAND
     In front is a GUARD STATION with two SENTRIES.
//(cut to M.S. of guard station)
     An occasional jet test FIRING in the background.
     A car -- a small white FORD -- comes CAREENING up to
     the sentry box, doing a good 65 mph.
(LS pans across screen as car drives up to box)
     The M.P.s snap to, made nervous by the car's approach.
     They flag it down.
     In the car are a CRAZED WOMAN and a FRIGHTENED BOY.
                          (in through open
                           car window)
                 What's happening here, Ma'am?
(MS of woman behind the wheel)
                 We must see Colonel Wilson.
     The M.P. studies her.(OTS)
                                 THE BOY
                 Yes.  We have to see him.  Call him.
                 He talked at my school.  He said we
                 could come here any time we wanted.
                 I have to tell him what's happening.
(shot of boy in back seat)
                 It's extremely important.  I'm the nurse
                 for the Tri-School District.  It's a
                 public health problem.
                          (to Sentry in box)
                 Go ahead.
(Camera pulls back to show car, MP and Sentry)
     The Sentry picks up the base telephone.
     COLONEL WILSON -- a handsome, sturdy looking man of middle
     age -- is standing in his office with an AIDE (SERGEANT
     RINALDI) -- both of them looking out the window at something
     we can't see.  The PHONE RINGS.
(Cuts to a CU of telephone ringing, as hand reaches to pick up receiver)
     Sgt. Rinaldi picks it up.
(zooms to MS of Sgt. Behind him the Colonel is looking out the window)
                                 SGT. RINALDI
                          (into phone)
                 Base Commander's office.  Yes.
                          (looks at Colonel
                           Wilson, and holds
                           the phone out to him)
                                 COL. WILSON
                          (taking the phone)
                 This is Colonel Wilson.
                 Yes, I did speak at the Hillcrest
                 School a couple of days ago.
                          (listens -- looks
                           at Rinaldi)
                 Really.  Hm.  Very well.  Send
                 them up.  No, not in their own
                 car.  Have them driven up.
     He puts down the phone.
                                 COL. WILSON (CONT'D)
                 Now what?
     Rinaldi looks at the wall clock.  10:45.
(Cuts to clock, turns back to window, POV shot as he peers through the blinds –striated view)
                 You better not keep them here too
                 damn long.
     Rina1di closes the levelor blinds.
(eerie foreboding music)
(Wide shot outside the complex of Jeep approaching)
     The WOMAN and the BOY with two M.P.s, being driven across
     the Air Base.  The BOY is 11 years old, and scared-looking.
     The WOMAN is attractive, in her late 20's, wearing a **white
     nurse's uniform**.
(CU of interior of car –Woman and Boy)
     The lights are on all over the base.  Jeeps coming and
(POV from boy’s perspective as he looks out the window)
     Suddenly, the Boy -- looking around as they drive --
     SEES something, and tugs at the Woman's arm.
(cut to MS of action interior car)
     She looks where he is pointing.  He points out TWO AIR
     FORCE MEN in **Air Force blue**, loading some equipment into
     an Air Force PICKUP.
(back to POV shot of outside action)S
     The Woman and the Boy's faces show grave concern as they
     stare at the TWO AIRMEN by the pickup.  They say nothing.
     The Woman and the Boy are escorted in by an AIDE (CAPTAIN
     CURTIS).  Colonel Wilson shakes their hands.
                                 COL. WILSON
                          (shaking their hands)
                 I'm Colonel Wilson.  This is Sergeant
                                 THE WOMAN
                 I'm Linda Magnuson.  I'm the nurse for
                 the Tri-School District, which includes
                 the Hillcrest School.
                                 COL. WILSON
                 You mentioned something about a public
                 health problem.
                 I'll get to that.  This is Jimmy Gardner,
                 a pupil at Hillcrest.
                                 COL. WILSON
                          (taking it in)
                 Won't you sit down.
                          (gestures to chairs)
     Everyone sits.  The Colonel folds his hands on his desk.
                                 COL. WILSON (CONT'D)
                 Please tell me what's on your minds.
     Linda looks at Jimmy.
                          (looks at Linda; then
                           at the Colonel)
                 First I have to look at the back of
                 your neck.
     The Colonel looks baffled.  Exchanges glances with Sgt.
                 He's serious, Colonel.
     Rinaldi watches suspiciously as the Colonel turns and lets
     Jimmy look at the back of his neck.  The boy studies his
     neck closely, pulling down his collar.
                 All right.  I had to be sure.
                                 COL. WILSON
                 Sure of what?
     Jimmy and Linda look at each other again.
                 It's rather difficult to tell this
                 story.  Yesterday Jimmy came to see
                 me in my office.  He was very upset...


April 25, 2008. Tags: . Uncategorized.

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